Using and Improving Automated Evaluation of Writing from Students’ Perspective
1. School of Foreign Studies, China University of Mining and Technology, Xuzhou 221116, China
2. College of International Studies , Southwest University, Chongqing 400715, China
| Abstract: | As a newly-rising online tool, Automated Evaluation of Writing (AWE) combines multiple functions of improving the writing, playing an increasingly important role in the teaching of English writing in China. It has attracted more and more scholars to conduct the relevant research. However, rare studies noticed the students’ perspective. In view of this, this study follows the guidance of metacognition, constructivism, activity theory, dynamic assessment theory and output hypothesis in order to figure out what students can utilize with AWE, which gives a boost to the actualization of the practical value of AWE and most importantly, the development of students’ English writing. To obtain real feedback from students on AWE (take Correcting Network for example), this study applied the method of questionnaire and interview to collect data. In this way, we concluded the comments on AWE from the perspective of students, and found out the ideal practice to benefit students in their English writing. According to the analytical results, this study developed a student-centered model that mobilized the resources available to students in their learning. Because of the limitations of AWE for improving students’ writing, help from teachers, other students or peers, and even students themselves should play an active role in the use and improvement of AWE. |
| Keywords: | AWE; Feedback; Development of Students’ Writing; Evaluation of Writing; Students’ Perspective |
| DOI: | 10.57237/j.ssrf.2023.03.004 |
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收稿日期: 2023-04-01
接受日期: 2023-07-06
在线出版日期: 2023-07-24
基金
| 1. | Basic Scientific Research Project - China University of Mining and Technology-Social Science Fund (2022SK22) |
| 2. | Jiangsu Higher Education Association-Foreign Language Project (2022WYYB058) |
| 3. | Teaching Project-China University of Mining and Technology (2021YB53) |
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